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Views from the Choir Loft

Liturgical Translation: Your Thoughts?

Jeff Ostrowski · March 24, 2021

OME PEOPLE don’t like certain words. Each one of us has particular sensibilities, and that’s one reason hymn lyrics often change through the years. Some people believe they are singing “original” lyrics from certain hymnals, but they simply are not. For example: Hark! The Herald Angels Sing was originally Hark How All The Welkin Rings…but nobody sings that. In the famous hymn, SOUL OF MY SAVIOUR, a line is often altered: “Wash me, ye waters gushing from His Side.” People in countries like Australia detest the word “gushing”—which they believe sounds ugly—so they change it to “flowing.” This has nothing to do with Theology. In my opinion, certain words sound dingy, horse-and-buggy, and stale: “gloomy” and “bosom” and “strain” (meaning hymn) would be a few examples. Other words don’t belong in a hymnal because they’re ugly: “stomach” and “belly” are two examples. Some people are bothered by fake rhymes. I also worry about words like “wan” because people might mispronounce it. I think we should avoid using an excessive amount of words familiar only to the erudite, such as “surcease.”

Needless to say, many Catholics who suffer with heretical hymns would give anything to get rid of evil lyrics, even if that meant using flawed, predictable, or archaic language. The National Association of Pastoral Musicians—which is supposedly a Roman Catholic organization—has created “liturgical” materials which honor Buddha and Darwin.

By the way, not all Mediaeval poetry was excellent. Father Fortescue says: “Many hymns of the Middle Ages are frigid compositions containing futile tricks, puns, misinterpreted quotations of Scripture, and twisted concepts, whose only point is their twist.”

What do you think of this translation? It’s for Terribilis Est Locus Iste, a famous Introit:

I understand what it means, and it worked 215 years ago…but I don’t think it works these days.

On the other hand, maybe that Introit—“This place is awful!”—would have been be appropriate for the 18 February 2021 dedication of this brand new Roman Catholic Chapel of San Juan García College in Spain:

We emailed them to make sure this is a Catholic Chapel. Sadly, it is.

The Father Lasance hand-missal sometimes translates prayers in an interesting way. Father Lasance uses the word “winking,” which we have discussed. And check this out:

We heap Thine altars
with gifts, O Lord,
celebrating with
fitting honor…

The publisher of a major Catholic hymnal once told me she will never allow the word “womb” in any hymn lyrics. I personally have no problem with that word, but perhaps for her it was a medical term? I wonder what she would think of what Father Francis X. Lasance (d. 1946) did for 24 June, The Feast of the Nativity of Saint John the Baptist: “Before I formed thee in the bowels of thy mother…”

I would invite you to peruse an article of mine which explores this topic:

*  Should Hymn Lyrics Be Inordinately Archaic?
—An article by Jeff Ostrowski, posted 11 November 2020.

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Filed Under: Articles Tagged With: Francis Xavier Lasance, Heretical GIA Hymns, Terribilis Est Locus Iste Last Updated: March 25, 2021

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About Jeff Ostrowski

Jeff Ostrowski holds his B.M. in Music Theory from the University of Kansas (2004). He resides with his wife and children in Michigan. —(Read full biography).

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President’s Corner

    “Booklet of Eucharistic Hymns” (16 pages)
    I was asked to create a booklet for my parish to use during our CORPUS CHRISTI PROCESSION on 22 June 2025. Would you be willing to look over the DRAFT BOOKLET (16 pages) I came up with? I tried to include a variety of hymns: some have a refrain; some are in major, others in minor; some are metered, others are plainsong; some are in Spanish, some are in Latin, but most are in English. Normally, we’d use the Brébeuf Hymnal—but we can’t risk having our congregation carry those heavy books all over the city to various churches.
    —Jeff Ostrowski
    “Yahweh” in church songs?
    My pastor asked me to write a weekly column for our parish bulletin. The one scheduled to run on 22 June 2025 is called “Three Words in a Psalm” and speaks of translating the TETRAGRAMMATON. You can read the article at this column repository. All of them are quite brief because I was asked to keep within a certain word limit.
    —Jeff Ostrowski
    “Music List” • Pentecost Sunday
    Some have expressed interest in perusing the ORDER OF MUSIC I prepared for Pentecost Sunday (8 June 2025). If such a thing interests you, feel free to download it as a PDF file. Because our choir is on break this week, the music is relatively simple.
    —Jeff Ostrowski

Quick Thoughts

    Antiphons Don’t Match?
    A reader wants to know why the Entrance and Communion antiphons in certain publications deviate from what’s prescribed by the GRADUALE ROMANUM published after Vatican II. Click here to read our answer. The short answer is: the Adalbert Propers were never intended to be sung. They were intended for private Masses only (or Masses without music). The “Graduale Parvum,” published by the John Henry Newman Institute of Liturgical Music in 2023, mostly uses the Adalbert Propers—but sometimes uses the GRADUALE text: e.g. Solemnity of Saints Peter and Paul (29 June).
    —Corpus Christi Watershed
    When to Sit, Stand and Kneel like it’s 1962
    There are lots of different guides to postures for Mass, but I couldn’t find one which matched our local Latin Mass, so I made this one: sit-stand-kneel-crop
    —Veronica Brandt
    The Funeral Rites of the Graduale Romanum
    Lately I have been paging through the 1974 Graduale Romanum (see p. 678 ff.) and have been fascinated by the funeral rites found therein, especially the simply-beautiful Psalmody that is appointed for all the different occasions before and after the funeral Mass: at the vigil/wake, at the house of the deceased, processing to the church, at the church, processing to the cemetery, and at the cemetery. Would that this “stational Psalmody” of the Novus Ordo funeral rites saw wider usage! If you or anyone you know have ever used it, please do let me know.
    —Daniel Tucker

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“It will not be Rome to tell you what you should do, no: because you have the charism. …you have the Holy Spirit for this. If Rome were to begin to make the decisions it would be a blow to the Holy Spirit, who works in the particular Churches.”

— Pope Francis (27 March 2023)

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