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Views from the Choir Loft

Should Hymn Lyrics Be Inordinately Archaic?

Jeff Ostrowski · November 11, 2020

AITHFUL CATHOLICS scandalized by excessively colloquial language in modern hymnals have sometimes sought refuge in the opposite extreme, adopting inordinately archaic language from 200 years ago. My experience working in parishes and cathedrals all over the United States has convinced me this approach—despite good intentions—will never work. Today’s congregations will not accept language so archaic that it’s outlandish and hopelessly old-fashioned. Words that were quite common in the nineteenth century no longer have the same connotations; e.g. “breast” and “gay.”

The Brébeuf hymnal took so long to complete because the editors carefully examined every text. We did not consider certain words—Thee, Thy, Thine, Thou—to be problematic since all Catholics use them in the HAIL MARY and the OUR FATHER. On the other hand, modern hymn texts in the Brébeuf hymnal sometimes use “you” instead of “thee”—and #814 is an excellent example:

Rehearsal videos for each individual voice await you at #814.

E MUST AVOID hymn lyrics that are “unreasonably archaic”—but how can we judge that? After all, if somebody is forced to use a dictionary to find out what a word means, isn’t that positive and enriching? I am willing to bet that many of us have added words to our vocabulary because they occurred in a hymn and we wanted to know what they meant. Furthermore, in our current society anyone with an iPhone has instant access to a dictionary. Is this an exact science? Certainly not. For instance, I know a hymn editor who hated the word “womb” and refused to use it—whereas I have absolutely no problem with singing that word. So, honest people can disagree about hymn lyrics.

On the other hand, many 19th-century Catholic hymnals translated the O Salutaris Hostia as follows: “Intestine wars invade our breast.” A 19th-century Catholic translation of the Veni Creator Spiritus said: “And sweetly let thy Grace invade, Such Breasts, O Lord, as thou hast made.” A recent Catholic publication tried to “fix” the translation of Quem Terra Pontus Aethera, but made it even worse by mixing registers ineptly: “O happy Mother, you are blest; Enclosed beneath your lowly breast.” Many 19th-century hymnals have verses like the following: “Thou hast Made the Sparrows Gay; Listen to our Earnest Lay.” Would modern congregations accept this language? If you think I’m exaggerating, open any 19th-century hymnal or examine the 1906 Saint Basil’s Hymnal, promoted by Catholic bishops of that time. Or consider this stanza from a 1913 Anglican hymnal, which refers to “axles of thy car” as well as using the word “bosom” plus an archaic version of the Holy Name.

Whenever possible, the Brébeuf hymnal preserves the original language of the poet. On the other hand, hymn lyrics are constantly “smoothed out” over time, a process both natural and appropriate. For instance, I bet you sing: “O Come, O Come Emmanuel”—but the original version of that song was “Draw nigh, Draw nigh Emmanuel.” Similarly, I am willing to bet money that you sing: “Hark! The herald-angels sing”—but the original version of that song was “Hark how all the welkin rings.”

At a certain point in history, it seemed Saint John Henry Newman was going to be asked to translate the entire Bible into English for Catholics, but this never materialized. However, a century later the Roman Catholic bishops of England and Wales commissioned Monsignor Ronald Knox to accomplish that task. In Trials of a Translator, Monsignor Knox says he would have liked to have eliminated “Thou” and “Thee,” writing as follows:

As I mentioned already, the Brébeuf committee had no issue with “Thee” and “Thou” and “Thine”—and we felt no obligation to eliminate those words. In 1975, G.I.A. Publications forcefully agreed with the Brébeuf approach, although they inexplicably abandoned it a few years later. On the other hand, the Brébeuf hymnal included certain hymns using “You” and “Yours”—such as #814 above. In other words, we took a “both/and” approach, and since the book includes hundreds of hymns, people can do as they like.

The melody in the video above (“LAFITAU”) is quite beautiful, and I have come to love it. I have played it on the organ many times, using the Brébeuf Organ Accompaniment volumes. I never expected to fall in love with this hymn, but I have. Moreover, the composer Claude Goudimel (d. 1572) has made an ingenious harmonization with the LAFITAU melody placed into the Tenor voice:

I will create a score for this version—because it is so beautiful—but how should this be used? After all, there are multifarious ways to sing a hymn. Hymn #814 by Father Popplewell has nine (9) verses, so here is one possibility:

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About Jeff Ostrowski

Jeff Ostrowski holds his B.M. in Music Theory from the University of Kansas (2004). He resides with his wife and children in Michigan. —(Read full biography).

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President’s Corner

    “Music List” • 6th Sunday of Easter (Year C)
    Some have expressed interest in perusing the ORDER OF MUSIC I prepared for the 6th Sunday of Easter (25 May 2025). If such a thing interests you, feel free to download it as a PDF file. As always, the Responsorial Psalm, Gospel Acclamation, and propers for this Sunday are provided at the the feasts website.
    —Jeff Ostrowski
    “Gloria in Spanish” • Free Accompaniment
    Several people have requested an organ accompaniment for the GLORY TO GOD which prints the Spanish words directly above the chords. The Spanish adaptation—Gloria a Dios en el cielo—as printed in Roman Misal, tercera edición was adapted from the “Glória in excélsis” from Mass XV (DOMINATOR DEUS). I used to feel that it’s a pretty boring chant … until I heard it sung well by a men’s Schola Cantorum, which changed my view dramatically. This morning, I created this harmonization and dedicated it to my colleague, Corrinne May. You may download it for free. Please let me know if you enjoy it!
    —Jeff Ostrowski
    How Well Does ICEL Know Latin?
    This year, the Feast of Saints Peter and Paul (29 June 2025) will fall on a Sunday. It’s not necessary to be an eminent Latin scholar to be horrified by examples like this, which have been in place since 1970. For the last 55 years, anyone who’s attempted to correct such errors has been threatened with legal action. It is simply unbelievable that the (mandatory) texts of the Holy Mass began being sold for a profit in the 1970s. How much longer will this gruesome situation last?
    —Jeff Ostrowski

Quick Thoughts

    Antiphons Don’t Match?
    A reader wants to know why the Entrance and Communion antiphons in certain publications deviate from what’s prescribed by the GRADUALE ROMANUM published after Vatican II. Click here to read our answer. The short answer is: the Adalbert Propers were never intended to be sung. They were intended for private Masses only (or Masses without music). The “Graduale Parvum,” published by the John Henry Newman Institute of Liturgical Music in 2023, mostly uses the Adalbert Propers—but sometimes uses the GRADUALE text: e.g. Solemnity of Saints Peter and Paul (29 June).
    —Corpus Christi Watershed
    When to Sit, Stand and Kneel like it’s 1962
    There are lots of different guides to postures for Mass, but I couldn’t find one which matched our local Latin Mass, so I made this one: sit-stand-kneel-crop
    —Veronica Brandt
    The Funeral Rites of the Graduale Romanum
    Lately I have been paging through the 1974 Graduale Romanum (see p. 678 ff.) and have been fascinated by the funeral rites found therein, especially the simply-beautiful Psalmody that is appointed for all the different occasions before and after the funeral Mass: at the vigil/wake, at the house of the deceased, processing to the church, at the church, processing to the cemetery, and at the cemetery. Would that this “stational Psalmody” of the Novus Ordo funeral rites saw wider usage! If you or anyone you know have ever used it, please do let me know.
    —Daniel Tucker

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[to the executioner] Sir Thomas More: “I forgive you right readily.” [gives him a coin] “Be not afraid of your office; you send me to God.” Archbishop Cranmer: “You’re very sure of that, Sir Thomas?” More: “He will not refuse one who is so blithe to go to him.” [kneeling, he places his head on the chopping block]

— From “A Man for All Seasons” (1960 play by Robert Bolt)

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